Mentor Texts for Teaching Visualizing

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Strong readers are able to automatically visualize a story. They create mental images constantly as they read, so when readers are no longer able to visualize the story, they know that comprehension has broken down, and they need to take steps to fix it.

Struggling readers often don’t “see” the story due to comprehension issues. These readers need to be encouraged to engage with the text in order to notice when they “see” and “don’t see” the story.

One activity I like to do to practice visualizing is to read a few pages of a little known book with the cover hidden. I ask students to think about what the author is describing as I read it out loud.

This makes a great class discussion. Besides the fact that each of us may have slightly different mental images, we can also talk about the fact that illustrators use their own visualizations to create illustrations for the book and our mental images may or may not perfectly match their visual images, and that’s okay!

After some discussion, we continue to talk about how having a “movie in our heads” means that we’re most likely understanding what’s going on in the text.

If we don’t, we need to try some fix-up strategies (like going back, reading more slowly, sounding out or looking up words we can’t figure out, etc.) to help us get back to the story.

The books below are ones that I love using for visualizing mini-lessons because they should evoke strong images, helping your students practice visualizing.

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The Storm Book Mentor Text

1. The Storm Book

The Storm Book by Charlotte Zolotow is a poetic tale of one young boy’s curiosity during a summer storm.


The Black Rabbit Mentor Text

2. The Black Rabbit

The Black Rabbit by Philippa Leathers follows a young rabbit who can’t seem to shake his new friend, the black rabbit. No matter where he runs, the shadowy rabbit follows.


Come On, Rain! Mentor Text

3. Come on, Rain!

Come on, Rain! by Karen Hesse is about a little girl, Tess, who pleads to the sky for a rainstorm in order to feel relief from the draining summer heat.


Bedhead Mentor Text

4. Bedhead

Bedhead by Margie Palatini is all about that one scenario we all try our best to avoid on school picture day… a bad hair day! In this story, young Oliver is having a very bad hair day on his school picture day, and no matter how hard anyone tries, there’s no taming his crazy locks.


5. Dreams

Dreams by Ezra Jack Keats is a sweet story about a boy named Roberto and how the paper mouse he made at school helped saved Archie’s cat when it is cornered by a big dog in the middle of the night.


Home Run Mentor Text

6. Homerun

Homerun by Robert Burleigh explores famous baseball player Babe Ruth’s life, from his childhood into his preparation for hitting the big home run.


The Salamander Room Mentor Text

7. The Salamander Room

The Salamander Room by Anne Mazer is a heartwarming story about a young boy who finds a salamander in the woods and imagines how he can create a special home for him in his own room.


See the Ocean Mentor Text

8. See the Ocean

See the Ocean by Estelle Condra, who has experienced severe loss of sight, is a moving story about a little girl, Nellie, who is blind.


The Paperboy Mentor Text

9. The Paperboy

The Paperboy by Dav Pilkey is inspired by Pilkey’s own experiences as a paperboy. The picture book tells the story of a paperboy and his dog as they deliver newspapers in the early hours of the morning.


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Here are a few more mentor texts you can use to teach visualizing:

Roller Coaster by Marla Frazee

Twilight Comes Twice by Ralph Fletcher

Scarecrow by Cynthia Rylant

Night in the Country by Cynthia Rylant

Mud by Mary Lyn Ray

Hello Ocean by Pam Munoz Ryan

Nightsong by Ari Berk

Into the Sea by Brenda Z. Guiberson

Locomotive by Brian Floca



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